An array of thoughts flooded my mind when I cared to ascertain the purpose of my life I crunched some beliefs I munched some feelings focusing on my dreams envisioning my future I dusted off the qualms that rusted my mind I stand liberated!
De hosted Quadrille Monday at dVerse this week. He prompted to us write a quadrille which must include the word crunch or crunched or crunching.
Lovely !!
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Thanks Deepika!
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Beautiful.. if we can understand our being we are liberated.. though its difficult but not impossible..
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Awesome Vandana and such deep lines you have written. Great poem.
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It certainly is a great effort and needs lot of introspection but you rightly pointed out, it isn’t impossible 🙂 Thanks for your views!
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Thanks a lot Kamal! I am moved by your loving words 🙂
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Welcome Vandana always.
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stunning – well practical in our daily adventure…
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Thanks.
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I really enjoyed the nice rhythm….well, do you feel liberated from all these beliefs and emotions..?
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Loved that “crunched” and “munched” – such unusual words in this usage, which is liberating in and of itself.
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Thanks De. I know, an unusual usage but I hope it fitted in well 🙂
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I liked the description of qualms rusting the mind and the crunching of beliefs and munching of feelings.
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Thanks Frank. Appreciate it 🙂
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Love how you describe liberation.
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🙏🙏
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One must stand liberated
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Absolutely!
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