The prompt for day 6 is to write a poem that stretches your comfort zone with line breaks. That could be a poem with very long lines, or very short lines. Or a poem that blends the two. You might break to emphasize (or de-emphasize) sounds or rhymes, or to create a moment of hesitation in the middle of a thought.
I found the prompt quite interesting and thought of having some fun with it. I hope it brings a smile on your face too 🙂
Poem: Unforeseen Pauses
some
short
phrases
some illogical
B
R
E
A
K
S
some really long sentences that keep flowing like a river yearning to mingle in an ocean
some absurd
weird
thoughts that
keep thumping my
head
all the time
is what
I plan to
write for
today as
I
wish to
move
out of
my comfort
zone today breaking
the monotony of
discipline as I am a perfectionist and I hate inconsistencies
and I always endeavor for meaningful pauses
in my
poem so here
I
am adhering to
the prompt
of
NaPoWriMo
for day
six
today and I
comprehended that life
also often
exhibits
such
episodes of unforeseen
P
A
U
S
E
S
so let’s
revel in those as well and take them in our stride
stretch our comfort zone and seek
our
learning from
those
©Vandana Bhasin
Wonderful creative work Vandana. It did bring a smile to my face ☺️
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I am so glad to hear that 😍😍 Thanks Radhika dear 😊
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Woooow Vandana awesome attempt on the Prompt 🙂 Loved it and yes it did bring a big smile on my face 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Ha! I really enjoyed this. Perfect answer to the prompt. And still such a nice flow to it 😁
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Really, it did? I am so happy. Thank you so much Preethi. 😀😀
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Yes Vandana 😊😊😊 I just loved the way u have put this poem using break, pause… Loved it 😊
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Ha ha! Thank you so much. I smiled myself after I wrote it 😀😀
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🙏🙏
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Good and creative, vandana 👌
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Hey Deepika! Many thanks 🙂
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So well done! 🙂
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Totally like👌. Perfectionist you are for even in breaking your comfort zone, I see a perfection. You’ve done complete justice to the prompt which I found it challenging…And yes you had me smiling😊
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Oh I am so elated to hear this! It was like breaking all rules of poetry writing so wasn’t sure if that was fair. But now I’m happy 😍😍😍
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Thanks dear Pragalbha 😊😊
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You are very welcome 🙂
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