Day 2 prompt is based on this poem by Claire Wahmanholm, which transforms the natural world into an unsettled dream-place. One way it does this is by asking questions – literally. The poem not only contains questions, but ends on a question. Today, we have been challenged to write a poem that similarly resists closure by ending on a question, inviting the reader to continue the process of reading (and, in some ways, writing) the poem even after the poem ends.
Here’s my poem that revolves around questions 🙂
Poem: A hundred and one
A hundred and one reasons
Didn’t you say you have…to love me?
A hundred and one excuses
Didn’t I feel you have…to walk away from me?
A hundred and one explanations
Didn’t you give…for your insolence?
A hundred and one misconceptions
Didn’t we have…to split our relationship?
A hundred and one grounds
Didn’t we have…to be always upset?
A hundred and one emotions
Didn’t you evoke…all those years?
A hundred and one expectations
Didn’t we always have…from each other?
A hundred and one challenges
Didn’t we face…together in those times?
A hundred and one smiles
Didn’t we share…when we were together?
A hundred and one milestones
Didn’t we plan…to achieve as a couple?
A hundred and one time
Didn’t we regret… and feel apologetic?
A hundred and one chances
Didn’t life give us…to squeeze happiness?
A hundred and one motives
Can’t we find…to be again together?
©Vandana Bhasin
Nice. A good reminder to be an active participant in relationships you want to grow.
LikeLiked by 2 people
A positive relationship goals poem by you Vandana.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks for reading and commenting Maggie. Certain things we take for granted in every relationship and they tend to cost us a lot at times.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks dear Preeti. We always need to work on our relationships for a happy life, don’t we 🙂
LikeLike
I loved the flow of this poem and the theme – a reminder to value and nurture our relationships.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Stole my heart…well I wish everyone had hundred and one reasons to come back together!! 💓
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m glad you liked it Sunaina. I wish too that there were hundred and one reasons for everyone to be happy all the time 🙂 Thanks for reading and commenting.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m glad it spoke to you 🙂 Thanks for reading and commenting
LikeLike
Yes..I wish the same thing…but sadly we don’t have!!… I liked this post of urs!!. ☺️☺️
LikeLiked by 1 person