NaPoWriMo is finally here! Some light amidst darkness , I must say. So, we are sharpening our pencils, cleaning our notepads and of course oiling our minds 🙂
Here’s the prompt for Day 1 and we were also provided with a metaphor generator tool. I really had fun playing with the tool. I came up with a lot of interesting metaphors and have used about eight of them in my poem (I hope the overuse hasn’t spoiled the piece!)
Write a self-portrait poem in which you make a specific action a metaphor for your life – one that typically isn’t done all that often, or only in specific circumstances. For example, bowling, or shopping for socks, or shoveling snow, or teaching a child to tie its shoes.
Life- A cup of coffee
A cup of coffee
That’s what my life is
A cup of hot and strong mocha
That’s what it felt like the other day
It’s biting hot incense
Revealing the lava inside
When someone stated,
“You are malty, steely, undisturbed, spicy, and flat”
“I don’t mind,” I replied,
sipping the annoyance behind annoyed grasping
A glass of chilled frothy coffee
I prefer on hot humid days
When my senses, and my emotions,
carouse in recreation
like volcanic sea caves that have frosty fetors
I am the epitome of calmness and generosity (only those days),
A balm of words to the wounded, like the cold coffee on a hot day,
“You are the relaxation toward the gratification,” they cited that day
I adjust the milk sometimes,
To clear the whiffs of vaguenesses
Add a tinge of caramel or hazelnut
To suppress corrosivenesses and perplexities
“You are the sanities outside the hopelessness,” they say
As I appease the life’s gustation
A new flavor- a new fervor; a fresh aroma- a distinct vanity, each day
Yes, a cup of coffee, that’s what my life is!
©Vandana Bhasin
01.04.2020
Hey how are you? Hope you remember me
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I love this! You are the aroma and flavour of life. Excellent poem to start the poetry writing month.
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Hey Sang! Of course! How can I forget you, my Napowrimo mate 😀😀 Hope you are doing good. Corona keeping you indoors? Will head over to your take on the prompt soon.
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Hey thanks Gina! Hope you had a taste of your flavour too 😀😀
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I love coffee and yes I surely did
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Great ❤️
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Yup I am indoor…locked and working from home…but poetic comedy is my charger of laptop has got fried on first day of lockdown…
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Oh oh! That’s a tragedy… how are you managing then?
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Using the mobile app… that’s why don’t know how the poems are getting format or looking like
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They are looking fine 🙂
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Very tasty indeed!
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😀😀 Thanks Peter
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Vandana the poem was so beautiful and well taken challenge too.
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Thank you so much Kamal! Just poured out my love for coffee 🙂 Hope you are doing well
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Welcome Vandana. Stay safe and yes all is well. 😊😊😊😊
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You too take care and stay safe 🤗🤗
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🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻😊😊😊
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Ah… a poem of coffee. Delicious. I miss my Starbucks Cappucino
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Coffee… anytime 🙂
Thanks Smitha.
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