NaPoWriMo Day 9: The challenge today is to write a “concrete” poem – a poem in which the lines and words are organized to take a shape that reflects in some way the theme of the poem. This might seem like a very modernist idea, but poets have been writing concrete poems since the 1600s! Your poem can take a simple shape, like a box or ball, or maybe you’ll have fun trying something more elaborate, like this poem in the shape of a Christmas tree.
Well, I must admit that I spent more time in adjusting the words to take the requisite shape than in writing the poem 🙂 And I’m still uncertain if the shape looks like what I wanted it to be – A Heart! I do hope you’ll share your feedback in the comments 🙂

Poem: Love
L O V E
A word or an emotion
Or a word swathed in emotions,
Memories that it unfolds,
joys and woes,
laughter and moans,
multifaceted – its artifices manifold
and yet the most cherished.
I wonder what do I love the most
or should I say whom do I love the most?
Nah! What do I love the most sounds more appealing.
Ask why?
For I can’t get into the scuffle of “What! You don’t love me?”
So let me solve the maze of what do I love the most-
splashing colors on canvas?
Or a coffee with a toast
or making sense of the shows on Netflix and Hotstar;
what about some chat with my good old pals;
or a few lazy hours in my bed.
Well, a walk on the beach also stands a good chance,
it even beats gazing stars in sky!
But is it the best? I don’t think so…
So what do I love the most, I still can’t seem to elect.
Ah! Music. Yes I love it the most and pair it with some baking.
Well no! I can see that bookshelf peeping too,
and that list of “books to be read”
above it- dangling!
Now someone please help me outta this daze!
Have you ever heard me revealing my love, my taste?
Hey wait! I got it!
What a fool I’ve been all this while!
Love, after all, it drives one crazy
What I love the most is what I’m doing right now
Yes you’re right,
Nothing equates my love for writing,
my true passion, my only respite.
In this madness that unfolds every single day,
the tides of emotions that forever sway,
Writing- the only love that holds me sane!
Writing – the only love that never betrays
My prayer, my S O L A C E !
©Vandana Bhasin
09.04.2020
It certainly does looks like a heart.
You are creative in that sense too…♥️
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Brilliant brilliant 👏. So very beautifully done. Bravo , Vandana ❤️
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I’m so relieved to hear it 😃 I wasn’t quite happy with the outcome but that was the best I could manage. Thank you so much Rashmi ❤️
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Thank you so much Yassy darling. Your words lifted my spirits 😍 I was so uncertain of the outcome 💕
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It’s wonderful, Vandana. You are so gifted .. stay safe
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You should be happy. Here you are intimidating people like me through your art🤗 just kidding. You did wonderful 💛💛
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certainly looking like a heart…the poem is wonderful as well
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You got the shape absolutely right. Well done!
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Is it? My kiddos still don’t see a heart in there 😜 Thank you smitha 💕
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I enjoyed reading this very much. Thank you for posting it
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I’m so glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words 😊
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Oh thanks Sang! I’m happy my efforts proved worthwhile 😀
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Ha ha. Thanks and lots of love 💕
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Love you Yassy dear. You take care too 💕
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Love you 🤗.. Vandana
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Ha ha…not a heart but it’s totally symmetrical.
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I really dig this. It seems that you and I share a love. I love the breezy rhyme scheme as well. 🙂
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Lucky Vandana,
You have found your true love. I am still scrambling.
Very craftily written, while prudently eluding whom do you love. 😁
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Aww… we all find our path sooner or later Saumya. I’m sure you’ll find your passion too.
And yes I managed to avoid the discussion on whom I love the most 😜 Thanks for reading and commenting 🤗🤗
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I’m glad 🙂
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😀😀
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