तुम और मैं
जैसे कागज़ पर लिखी एक हसीन कविता
कुछ एहसासात बिखेरती हुई
कुछ लम्हों को अलफ़ाज़ में पिरोती हुई
दिल के तारों को छूती हुई
ख़्वाबों को आँखों में सजाती हुई
जीने की इक आस जगाती हुई
…
तुम और मैं
जैसे सावन की पहली बरसात
जैसे सर्दी में धूप का एहसास
जैसे सागर का आलिंगन करता ठंडा हवा का झोंका
जैसे काले बादलों से पूर्णमासी के चाँद का झांकना
जैसे ओस की बूंदों के छूने से फूलों का खिलखिलाना
जैसे धरती और गगन का क्षितिज पर मिल जाना
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तुम और मैं
जैसे खुदा से माँगी हुई एक दुआ
जैसे दिल से निकली एक खूबसूरत आरज़ू
जैसे वक़्त को ठहरने को मजबूर करता एक लम्हा
जैसे ज़हन में सहेज कर रखा हुआ मोहब्बत का वो पल
जैसे यादों के पिटारे से खुशियों के अनमोल पल ढूंढना
जैसे टूटते सितारे से माँगी हुई ख़्वाहिश का मुकम्मल होना
…
तुम, मैं और हमारी मोहब्बत
जैसे खुदा का एक बेश कीमती तोहफ़ा
जैसे अपने बन्दों पर की गयी इनायत
जैसे हौंसलों का तक़दीर से लड़ना
जैसे अधूरी दास्ताँ का दोबारा इब्तिदा होना
जैसे कायनात का हमें मिलाने की साज़िश करना
जैसे दो रूहों का रस्मों से परे मिलना
…
तुम और मैं …
©वन्दना भसीन
16.09.2021
“This post is a part of ‘UMeU’ Poetry Blog Hop #UMeUBlogHop organized by Manas Mukul . The hop is brought to you by Soul Craft and You, Me & The Universe.”

बहुत ही ख़ूबसूरत कविता.
जैसे हौंसलों का तक़दीर से लड़ना
जैसे अधूरी दास्ताँ का दोबारा इब्तिदा होना
जैसे कायनात का हमें मिलाने की साज़िश करना
जैसे दो रूहों का रस्मों से परे मिलना।
you are equally good in English and Hindi poetry. Loved your writing style and selection of words to make it a beautiful piece.
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Thank you so much Abha. It means a lot coming from you as I totally loved your poem on theme ♥️♥️ Truly grateful 🙂
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Happy feel देने वाली कविता। At places it stirred memories, at places it made me feel nostalgic …enjoyed it….writing in Hindi made a huge difference to the feel it gave.
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Similes are such an exceptional poetic device and you know how to use it well Vandana
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Awww…thank you Pooja ♥️♥️
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Such a beautifully written poem. Loved your choice of words and similes. Enjoyed reading both your English and Hindi poems.
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Yadomae chupihuyi kushi dudna…loved the feeling that added the poetic essence and also told the reality.
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“जैसे ओस की बूंदों के छूने से फूलों का खिलखिलाना
जैसे धरती और गगन का क्षितिज पर मिल जाना”
Lajawab!
A beautiful portrayal of a deep emotion called love.
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So well expressed!
May this “you & me” always party! 🙂
While reading your poem, I remembered the lines from the Hindi movie song- “Ek Ladki Ko Dekha To Aisa Laga” (1942 A Love Story).
I actually read your poem in that tune 🙂
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Thank you Priyanka ♥️
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Thank you for your beautiful words Sivaranjini ❤
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Oh my! I’m on cloud nine 😍😍 That is one of my favorite songs 😊 Thank you for such a beautiful comment Anita 💜
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Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts my dear. I’m glad you liked my take on the theme 🙂♥️
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There are some emotions that get beautifully expressed in Hindi. I’m happy it gave you a happy feel and took you down memory lane. Thanks Janaki ♥️
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That was so soulful and loved the various comparisons😍
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Bahut hi sunder kavita, Tum aur main ke rishte ki gehrayion ko bakhubi darshati hui. har ek line ko maine dobara padha, dil khush ho gaya.
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You have filled so much love into tum and hum that it looks like a unbreakable bond. Thanks for spreading positivity through your poetry. Loved it.
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Such a romantic weave Vandana, I could actually hear a beautiful ghazal as I was reading the same, I am sure some one will acquire rights and record this soon
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Such beautiful comparisons. So smooth flowing. Your hindi verses are as beautiful as English. Loved it.
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Thank you Namratha ♥️♥️
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Aur aapke comments se mera dil khush ho gaya Archana 😍😍 Thank you so so much. I’m glad you liked it
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Aww…Swati your words really made me smile. I’m so happy that you liked it. Thanks for such beautiful words of appreciation 💖💖
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OMG! That’s too high a praise! I’m on cloud nine ❤️❤️ I wish your words come true 😀 Thank you so much for your appreciation dear Roma. You made my day ❣️
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Thank you dear Gowri! It means a lot ❤️❤️
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I totally loved the poem. Such beautiful images you have conjured. Reminded me of the song ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga … I am saving this one
Deepika
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Such a beautiful poem. Bohot hi dino ke baad ek prem bhari pyari kavita padhi. Thanks for writing this.
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Thank you so much Deepika for your lovely words of appreciation ❤ I actually didn’t realize that it’s on the lines of that song till someone pointed out in comments here 😃 Means a lot. Lots of love and gratitude ❤ ♥️
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Aww…thank you Neha! I’m so happy you felt my words with so much love 💖💖
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The poetry is filled with metaphors that every person can relate to and it strikes the chord with every positive soul.
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Thank you Meenal for such positive feedback ❤️❤️
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Ati Sunder Vandana ji. Hindi aur Angreji dono me ek si nipunta. Is kavita me gajab ke roopak ka prayog kiya hai. It was so lovely to have you as a part of #UMeUBlogHop and witness your wonderful writing.
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I had a smile through out reading this poem from you. Such beautiful use of imagery that it transported me to a new world full of love, a pristine one.Loved it.
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Thank you so much Manas. Aapka theme hi itna khoobsurat tha ki kalam chal padi 🙂 I enjoyed reading lovely creations from all participants. Thanks for hosting 🙂
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Glad to have given you a reason to smile and offering a glimpse of the world of love ❤ Thank you so much for sharing your views. It means a lot. Your comment has made me smile too 😃
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Beautifully expressed poem. I am a die-hard romantic and could actually feel each word. Keep writing!
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The sweetness of young love is making readers mushy. Beautifully written.
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बेहद खूबसूरत कविता
तुम और मैं जैसे एक दुआ, जैसे धरती और गगन का क्षितिज पर मिल जाना
बहुत ही खूबसूरत शब्दों से सजाई हुयी है ये पंक्तियाँ
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It’s all my pleasure 🥰
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Beautifully penned emotion
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Lovely poem. Not much of a hindi reader, enjoyed this one👍
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It was such a pleasure reading this. Love how you expressed yourself.
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Itni khoobsurat apki yeh kavita paad kar dil mera lafzo k liya jaisa taaras gaaya hai, har ek lafz jaise ek ahsaas ho,
Wah!! Sahi main bahut acha 🥰💐
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Thank you such Reshma. Aapse tareef sun Kar Mera dil bhi khush ho Gaya 😍😍 Bahuy shukriya
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Thank you Mayuri. I’m glad you liked it ♥️
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Thanks for reading Zenobia 💖
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Much thanks 😊
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Bahut shukriya 🙏🙏
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Thanks Pragnya 😃♥️
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Thanks dear. I’m glad you could feel all the love ❤
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बहुत सुंदर! “ दो रूहों का रस्मों के परे मिलना”
This line is eternal!!! Loved the verse and the devices used to decorate it
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