sharp rays of the sun
illuminate each planet
hallucinating
planets for billions of years
what a clear supremacy
The tanka incorporates prompt words “clear” (synonym of “clean”) and “sharp” of Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge # 33
sharp rays of the sun
illuminate each planet
hallucinating
planets for billions of years
what a clear supremacy
The tanka incorporates prompt words “clear” (synonym of “clean”) and “sharp” of Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge # 33
Great tanka words. Nice.
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Great !
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Nice use of the prompt words. Well done! ❤
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Thanks Anjana!
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Thanks Colleen!
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Ah.. those rays are fallen in your words vandana
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Lovely poem.
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Thanks for your lovely words Akhila 🙂
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Thanks Raja 🙂
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